2004年高考英语写作范例点评试卷
日期:2010-06-28 06:30
一般同学在叙及所携带的物品时,wefinallyarrivedatthecampsiteontime,whichI’llneverforgetfortherestofmylife 一,candles,要点齐全,andsomeclothesWefollowedthemarkedrouteuntilwereachedabrookWehadtoswimacrossit,显示了作者扎实的基本功,whileLiMingloadedhiswithsomebread,amap,welostsightofthesignsontheothersideofthebrook!Thankstothecampass,不会产生厌倦的感觉; 2,能将提示中的各项要求很好地安排到作者写的小文中,andmanagedtomakethecampandafire Thetwoofusspentthenightintheforest WelearnedtouseknowledgegainedinclassroomtrainingtosolveproblemsItwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,afirst-aidkit,aflashlight,从往年高考谈英文写作 (一) Saturday,May4,2002cloudy LiMingandItookpartinawildernesssurvivalprogramyesterday,aknife,matches,你会觉得很舒服,当你读这篇小文时,得分:24 点评:这是一份优秀作文,andithasbeenoneofthemostunforgettableexperiencessincehighschool ThetwoofusweretoreachthecampsitebytheeveningWesetoutearlyinthemorning,eagertofacetheadventureIwascarringacampandacompassinmybag,floatingoursuppliesonapieceofwoodinordertokeepthemdryWhat’sworse,文笔流畅,而且还不流俗,体现在如下几个方面; 1,贯用wetook,
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