学生书面表达常见错误高三英语试卷
日期：2010-04-05 04:23
didn'tstophercarFindingshehadcausedanaccident，高三英语学生书面表达常见错误（1）动词与主语关系不清误：IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandwasabouttocrossParkRoad正：IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandhewasabouttocrossParkRoad误：Butthecarranoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman正：Butthedriverdroveoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman误：Theparkshouldchargetheentrancefee正：Theentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks正：Peopleshouldpayfortheentrancefeeiftheygototheparks（2）句子之间的逻辑关系不清误：Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver，thewomanspedhercartofleeawayFortunately，单一化，didn'tstophercarFindingshehadcausedanaccident，Idecidedtohelphim（3）过多的长句使句子复杂化，awoman，whowasawoman，thewomanspedhercartofleeawayTheoldmanandIsawthecar'snumberIt'sAC864Theoldmancouldn'tmovesoIdecidedtohelphim正：Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver，Isawthecar'snumberIt'sAC864Noticingtheoldmancouldn'tmove，范例1修改前：Afamoussportsmanwasgivingaspeechwhichwasveryinteresting修改后：Afamoussportsmanwasgivingaveryinterestingspeech范例2修改前Itwas，
查看全部