写作材料归纳（二）高三英语教案

otherstudentsagainsttheidea(against前加are)（3）(缺少宾语)：Heseatedonthegrass(seated后加“himself”或在”seated”前加“was”)B：“画蛇添足”型：(pairwork)语意重复：Hereturnedbackyesterday(back)谓语重复：Butthereare60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefee(去掉thereare，Thetimepastquickly(past→passed)3)误用宾语Iwassopleasedtohearfromyourletter(yourletter→you;hearfrom----receive)4)误用表语Thepriceofmycarisveryexpensive(expensive→high)5)误用定语ChinahasamorepopulationthanJapan(more→larger)6)误用介词Thethiefranawaytothedirectionofthecoast(to→in)D“Chinglish”型，Eg．高考:“Highexam”1）．Thehopeofourparentsisveryhigh（→Ourparentsexpecttoomuchofus）2）．Hisrighteyeisblind（→Heisblindintherighteye）E．“瞻前不顾后”型，2007届高考写作系列指导材料（二）如何使书面表达显出文采；展示个性；亮而出众（一）TrytoavoidmistakesA:“缺胳膊少腿”型：（1）(缺少主语)：Butwas6o’clock(was前加it)（2）(缺少谓语)：However，或在are前加关系代词who;)多宾语（或宾语不恰当）：Hedressedhisclothesquickly(去掉hisclothes，Don’tworryYourbodywillgetwellsoon(yourbody→you)2)．误用谓语，或把hisclothes改为himself;)C“张冠李戴”型：1)．误用主语，(Individualwo，